Talk:Archive:Alternate Ending for Animorphs 54 The Beginning/@comment-140.153.68.93-20160309221105

as a fan, I have to admit that it has some potential minus a few canonicity errors. you were able to, for the most part, capture the personalities of the pre established characters and introduce some rather compelling new ones. all in all, very good for story.

although it kind of read more as something akin to Star Trek than Animorphs...

now comes my rant: as a writer myself, there are a few issues with this story...

First, POV: it's written in third person. not a huge issue, but as a direct continuation, it's a bit odd.

second, the grammatical/spelling errors: it's pretty easy to tell that it was typed up online then and there. I'd recommend using a word processor first then pasting it.

finally, there are quite a few plot holes and continuity errors sprinkled throughout it.

overall, it was a pretty good read once I fed my inner grammar Nazi a cookie and told him to go sit on the couch...